Short and...well not really very sweet...Haunting and hollow is more what I'd say..not sure hollow is the right word...It's numb and at the same time like you're being completely open...and now i'm just rambling and over analyzing...xx
Isn't this what we all fear. haha. I really like this. It is short, sweet, and really has a great topic. It is easy to read and easy to get in to. I really like poems like this one. THank you for sharing it here! All the best.
J
I'm at art college in Singapore.
"...I never heard them laugh. They had,
Instead, this tic of scratching quotes in air -
like frightened mimes inside their box of style,
that first class carriag.. more..