XXII

from an altered book i'm making

                                a better opportunity for explora-

tion        was all very attractive                    though

                He

 

                                virtuously calculated that

                                In the matter of

           a good assortment

of papers

 

 

                It happened to be

 

 

          of extremely various quality

 

 

                he went home

feeling

           he simply must go

Reviews

[Que]

Very nice poem.
I don't know about the layout though...it seems a bit too scattered. Of course, I know that that's what you intended (duh), it's just that generally, the layout has...I don't know how to say it. A direct meaning to it?
Gosh, that sounds mean.
And that's to say that I actually really like it (poem and layout together), it's just that it confuses me a bit. :D
Anyway, ignore me I guess, because it's really good and I loved it.
Cheers and have a good day.