The Sun And Other Substances

It was summer

We were drunk on

The sun and other substances

And I drew a place

                Somewhere new for us

 

                           A world where the sky reaches the ground

           And the sun holds its rays

      Out like a million arms

                           Where the houses are towers

      With more windows than bricks

           And when we breathe

                      Our breath cartwheels

                           In swirls of turquoise light

 

                Now I doodle

Remember. And miss you.

Reviews

[Beatrice Mars]

'It was summer
We were drunk on
The sun and other substances'

That's beautiful, the past tense makes the whole thing so sad, but beautiful at the same time. I love it! x