i was not sober for this one and i was also very openly sad

id rather have the taste

of your goodbye on my lips

than any new hello

but all the leaves on the trees

and stars that shine

must go away 

sometime

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

A lovely little poem, it is filled with sadness but you give the reader much imagery. Also you have a universal theme here which many will relate to.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

A lot of thoughts and wishes in the poem. I liked the honest tone and wish. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Claire Downey]

You're too nice, thank you very kindly

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.