ALL ABOARD...

ALL ABOARD...

A Poem by Ivory
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This was a picture excercise that i was working on to help get me out of my creative funk... lol

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He sailed…
Letting the waves drift him deeper
Inside;
On a journey to find
Pleasure, hidden;
Given him directions,
Detailed map;
His confidence scares me.
Posses the power to capture my soul;
Must board his ship
Sail away…

© 2008 Ivory


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I like... nice metaphors/analogies. Short and sweet. Happy Sailing!

Posted 17 Years Ago
nicely done

Posted 17 Years Ago


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 Added on September 1, 2008

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Ivory
Ivory

(Formerly: NYC), Currently: Bethlehem, PA



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Cafe member since 2007 I express myself through poetry. It has helped me get through some obstacles in my life, and I’m stronger now than ever. I love feedback and I appreciate all who take th.. more..