My Garden

This piece was posted a long time ago, before the whole system go all screwed up. lol I changed it a bit, trying to explore and be creative...

Take my hand, let me lead you,
soak up the beauty that surrounds you.
Enter my garden...

Watch my flower bloom

With the mere sight of you.

The beauty of rain drops;

Glistening on the petals.

Your hands appreciate its softness,

Gently you caress them with your finger tips

 

Inhale sweet smells;
my fruit, rich and succulent.
Ruby red colored cherries
prominently displayed for your enjoyment.
Touch,

Let the softness linger on your lips.
Nibble,

Tease yourself with a taste,
the smile on your face tells me
you'll return to this place.

Indulge in the pleasure you find,
what I offer you is yours,

Come explore;
I will always invite you back inside....
My garden.

Reviews

[Voltaire Mephisto (aka ..]

Something tells me this isn't about a literal garden. lol. Great symbolism. Everything you write makes me visualize bedroom eyes.

[☮]

This is definitely a hypnotic piece... It puts you in a nice zone and the material is real. Always a pleasure to view your work. Nice.

[Mr. Deft Diction]

You write with such softness that it's awe-inspiring. I could just sit back and read your pieces and let my imagination do what it does. And that is exactly what I as a reader want to do when I dive into a piece of work by someone else. You never cease to drop my jaws....

dope work.