Lonely Nights

It was late at night,

I couldn’t sleep,

Needing an instant gratifying release;

I closed my eyes and pictured you.

And all the things we use to do.

How you would reach for me,

While lying in bed;

Your fingers circling my thighs,

No words said.

Melting into the sheets,

Overwhelming heat;

Doesn’t take long for me to reach my peak;

Your body covers mine.

And inside me,

You come alive.

Stroking and holding me tight.

A beautiful way to end the night;

Suddenly I open my eyes…

 

Remembering, your not here,

My eyes swell with tears.

It was just one of many moments,

I know I must leave behind,

Comfort in my thoughts of you, I still find.

Recapture our love again, we might.

Do you think of me,

When you can’t sleep at night?

Reviews

[Laoidhigh Uilleag]

Very strong in the art of remembrance and reality!

Thanks for your submission :D

[Vampiric Kitty]

I absolutely loved this piece. It's very intense. Great work!

[kollaboratyve]

This is a very well writen poem. A lot of imagery and symbolism and tone. Good write!!!!! You have a great style of conversating in your work,very inviting

[Voltaire Mephisto (aka ..]

Very sad and completely understandable. It's like our bodies have their own memory and naturally crave the people we've been with. At least that's what I've experienced and feel when I read this piece.

[Dionysus Cain]

nice, nice, memories about someone that has left, being alone does suck , but memories, without those who would we be?

[Charles D. Moorer]

Nicely done. This is memory wrapped in passion.

[~IlOvEcHrIsToPhErBuRnEt..]

Thats so good, yeah it does sound kind of erotic but i like the way you worded it

[Bliss]

Wow.......This was awesome. Sexy and sad at the same time. Takes talent to achieve that :)