Waiting for Summer

A Spring Haiku

Spring will not be free

While winter's icy waters

Fall from warming skies

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes winter just hangs on and hangs on...the groundhog can't shake the snow because it doesn't want to let go...and the skies aren't warming enough..

i like the idea of spring not being free...

i see reflected in this very cool piece, humans...those who cannot have rebirth of love because they can't let go of a cold past.

[clisa]

Thanks - I like your interpretation. I love haiku - the structure seems to bring out my creativity.

[Ency Bearis]

I like the brevity, a remarkable Haiku.

[clisa]

Thank you. I like the brevity of the haiku form as well.