Creed of a Lost Crow

I am crow, if so why can't I fly with my flock? Why am I left behind?

Breed of the flock, but left so far apart.

The feel of fog on my skin to ease the pain.

My only companion left is the Autum wind and the fog upon the night.

I had to watch them go, so now I walk this path alone.

Reviews

[Lunar Pup]

You know you aren't really alone Cory... Lots of people really do care about you... But this is a really good poem and I know how it feels...

[Alaska Frost]

Excellent write!! I really enjoyed reading your poem!!!
Here's some constructive criticism for you:
This line seems kind of incomplete: "The feel of fog on my skin to ease the pain." You could change it to "The feel of fog on my skin eases the pain.", which is the same just besides a change in two words.
I really like these lines...
"My only companion left is the Autum wind and the fog upon the night.
I had to watch them go, so now I walk this path alone."
^Awesome ending!!!!
One thing though, "Autum" is supposed to be spelled "Autumn." I'm sure it is just a typo!!!

-Alaska Frost :)