Your little habit

the distinct smell of the bush

sleeping over the blankets.

you fill me

with wherever you are.

your sweltering cologne,

rich like the blend of

woodland aromas.

 

the delicate tea stain

sleeping under the blankets.

faded scarlet

like young red berries.

even on winter nights,

you have always liked

summer fruits the most

 

yet, some people say

you have just that little habit of

appearing in my dreams

every single night.

Author's Note

i'm not fluent in english

Reviews

[G. B. Banks]

this is totally fluent and dope
love this. super poem

"you have always liked
summer fruits the most" .... I love the caring comefrom these lines Jess

cheers
Blue

[JMaster1]

I think I am going to fall in love with your writing

[An owl on the moon]

In each line is woven a deep, richly ornamented emotional thread, and you weave them into a tapestry of loving, of longing, and of dreams, wondrous sweet dreams. Maravilhoso, Jéssica.

[Jamie]

Great work! Really good read :)

[JC]

you write english beautifully and with such emotion...love this, incredible.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Interesting read... the lines of this have such fluidity in them... Some dream you have in this write... show through and lifts the reader with your words...

[fireblossom]

Perhaps your lack of fluency releases you from rules and convention. Your words are like paint on canvas. I think this is very profound. I like your writing very much.

[Notsoloud]

For not being fluent in English it's rather good. This poetry left me with a warm feeling sort of. A real closeness. Like hot chocolate. Good poem.

[Pranav Malhotra]

haha, language is no barrier to emotions...
Nice one :)

[Jéssica Fernandes]

thank you :)