....twilight....

random thoughts from a distracted mind

the fantasy my life bears

The spirit in me no fear

 

 i have deleted this poem

Author's Note

i wrote it with closed eyes...you might as well close your eyes after reading it!

Reviews

[courtney]

its interesting. i dont quite understand it all over. however i like how you used internally rhyme most people dont and i think its kool how you stray from the flock by doing so. as for writing with your eyes close i do the same thing. i find that it helps you get intouch with your inner self more easily. keep the poems comming.