......A Soldiers Destiny.......

"while we sit out and relax someone is dying a million seconds"

Yes I said I felt it

I touched it

i have deleted this poem.

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems

Reviews

[Cantadora]

Speechless at first, then exploding with applause! Very nice! I feel this *unfortunately* fits the feelings of so many in recent days/months/years as their lives--their very souls and emotions--are displaced and disconnected by what is happening to the "world" around them. Bravo dear Coldust!!

[R.S. Wilder]

a brilliant piece. I'll be sure to check out more of your work often.

[~angelalala~]

i like this piece. i like the repetition of lines at the end of each stanza. very interesting & unique. "I felt like a sinner Now I felt no more" this is a brilliant line. strong & powerful message throughout. good write.