PASSIONS.....

A Poem by coldust

me touch you
feel your quacking skin

i have deleted this poem

© 2009 coldust

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Imperfection

Wow...that was so fantastic.
Took my breath away. I like how you play with words.

Heating up the hour
When hell is on loose!

Excellent ending. How did you come up with that?
Hell on loose!!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 17 Years Ago

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Added on January 2, 2009
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coldust

gurgaon,india, India

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i'm a p@et by heart & thatz all i know abou myself!!!! rest u guys decide.but first knock 8 my d@@r. let me tell u i'm also a bit amnesiac. more..