Inbox Me

I've been toying with the idea of writing a poem about Social Networking for a while now, so here is attempt No. 1.

Private communications,
Let slip in a public place,
I can overlook the happiness,
Spread on your soft, warm face.

I can ignore those sentences,
The shameless ‘I love you’,
Open it for the world to see,
Makes it patently true.

But the one thing I can’t face,
Is the thought of starting anew,
Looking into a glass screen,
To face a world without you.

Author's Note

Any input/criticism is greatly appreciated. Thanks.

Reviews

[☯]

Very smoothly done. It flows well, and the words are described very nicely. Well written. Excellent! :)

[DreyaArt]

interesting, different, intelligent.
Very nice, keep writing. Thanks for putting this here. It is much appreciated.