the stars scream beauty

about a boy who will never love me

i know this sounds redundant
and so very cliched
but when ever i see your face
my heart goes off pace

because your eyes are the stars
and the stars scream beauty
you are loved by every girl near and far
you and only you can be compared to a star

Author's Note

please tell me if u like it :)

Reviews

[Everson Taveras]

"because your eyes are the stars
and the stars scream beauty"
That's a killer line, seriously. Bittersweet is your poem, your prose is fruitful. This is really good. Keep it up. And yes, I liked it.

[SheDreamsInTheSun]

Aw, its so cute.

[Stella]

I don't just like it, I love it! I liked how you compared unrequited love to a star. The boy is seen loved and admired from afar by many and he is inaccessible as if he's a million light years away. Well done!

[Ariana H]

Love it beeestfraaan!(: