My beginning (Chapter 1) GRim

The pic is a picture of grim

           It was in the afternoon,I was with my girlfriend on our second date,her name is Ami Jones. She has long brown hair and beautiful brown eyes that stare deep inside you so deep it seems she can read your mind.It was winter-fall,we were by what used to be a huge lake.Now just a sheet of ice to skate on. Sometimes this place used to be packed with excited people having fun enjoying there lives not having a care in the world what may happen the next day. I ponder while holding her hand of why people are just so happy everyday." It's beautiful." she interrupts." Huh?" i reply turning to her.

"The ice" she says pointing to the distance. She turned to me and leaned in as a request for a kiss.

            I leaned in too kissing her on her lips. She wrapped her arms if only for a moment and plunged a dagger into my back. I shake with fear and asked "Why?" She pushed me back an inch and pulled the dagger out from my spine. She had this crazy look on her face with a evil grin. " It's for the best" she said then pushed me into the ice with her foot. The ice was very thin,I fell through the bottom of a frozen lake. White light glows through the sheet of ice above. Shadows of people gathering around a small but expanding crack.

            I passed out to the sound of her voice over and over saying it's for the best. My blood is dripping to the top leaving a puddle of blood behind in the snow. The cold water is streaming up my body and into my wound. It seems this lake is endless.It is dark all around me. I close my eyes and the next moment Im standing sideways.