Possesed By

 

Possessed by a wild, free spirit

She stands, unsure which road to take

For he takes her heart and bends it

Until she fears that it will break

Like a blossom overladen by the rain

It is filled, by him, to overflowing

How she wonders at the power

A man can have without knowing

Just what he has caused to flower

 

Possesed by the loveliest rose

He stands, still unsure what will be

For now, his heart is sitting in repose

As he fears the end of wild and free

Like a bird in a cage, his soul singing

It trills for her warmth and her touch

And he wonders how, from the start

A woman can mean so very much

To one who tried to close his heart

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[.mate.feed.kill.repeat.]

This is a beautiful piece. It was really unique how you first showed how she felt, then came back with him.

I would like to comment on your flow. This piece's flow was like none I've seen so far--absolutely perfect in every way. You should be proud of your beautiful creation... there are too few people in this world that can write like this.

[Christopher 'Windstorm'..]

awsome! brilliant! beautiful! these are three things that make your piece amazing. its uniqueness and the images that come to mind are just mind blowing. well done

[Wildfleour]

I really like this a lot, Constance. You showed two sides to the same coin.

[Fran Marie]

This is so beautiful in both form and content~
he has to let go of his wild free spirit tamed by the love of
his fair lovely rose~ A wonderfully penned piece for
the Love shack contest~THanks for submitting~Fran Marie

[Tomás Ó C..]

Anothe lovely rhyming poem telling its story well...

[lady o]

Oh my this is lovely ~~ enjoyed

[darkgurl]

This is a wonderful write here it shows both sides to the story, what a great write, full of emotion.

[Justin Tobey]

A beautiful piece showing two different sides to the same love story. It really shows how when people are in love, their lover seems even more wonderful to them than ever, and both are in awe of the amazing person they've stumbled upon. Excellent writing.