Forcing a Feeling

Yeah, not my usual style. It just had to be written.

Rhymes don't come easy,

Words don't just flow

And I never loved you;

Thought you should know

 

Forcing a feeling

Can be easy to do

When heart's been broken

By one better'n you

 

Everythings the same

As before I met you

Not one drop of hurt-

But I know you do

 

I'm sorry I lied

It's happened to me

But please, if you could

Fly on, you are free

 

 

Author's Note

I don't want this one rated. Not my best, it just had to be written.

Reviews

[Lori]

This has a bit of a sarcastic, flippant tone, and I think that's really interesting for the subject matter, especially since it's the narrator initiating the break-up. Its shows a sort of mistrust of relationships and love.

[☮]

I've been here. You force feelings, hoping to delete the past, instead making the present for someone else a lie. It's short and sweet. Thanks for sharing.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

You can't be happy if feelings must be forced. You just can't force yourself to love someone if you don't. Thank you for sharing this poem. Debileah

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

i loved it! It was brilliant! Superb! :-D sometimes the ones we like least are the ones that come out the best