Disturbance (Aragman poem)

An experiment with the form for the contest here at the cafe.

Stained curb

on a busy street where

Brats induce

ire by leaving their signs

Unbid traces

of spraypaint and foul black

 

Carbine dust

beauty of the city's

Acridist nub

founded by those who can

Rescind tabu

we can but it's true the

 

Bruised can't

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

All of the short lines are anagrams. This is an interesting form to play with!!! I'll have to try more....

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

I want to congratulate you for winning first place in my aragman contest. You did a great job, one I hope will encourage you to write more aragmans. For me they are nearly addictive. I say "nearly" because when I write too many, I am able to break away and try some other poetic forms!

Sal

[Helena]

Oh well done poetess! Loved it....what talent you have!
Excellent entry for Sal's contest. Looking forward to
reading more....

Good luck!

Helena :)

[Fran Marie]

THis is a very creative piece, Constance, your poem makes sense

in this Aragman form and is so well constructed in verse~ I don't know

if I can wrap my mind around this form~ maybe something will come to mind~

and I'll try writting one

WeLL DonE!! my friend~Fran Marie

[Salvatore Buttaci]

That's one of the best held-together aragmans I've seen in a long while! Thanks for entering it in my contest.

Sal

[The Mad Prophet]

I never heard of this style, but I am willing to learn. It is very well done, very well written.
It is expressed with alot of little chaos.