grain of sand

A Poem by falling_toxic_rain

ive never been any good-

never known.

its dark,

doesnt mean i cant feel the tears,

bittersweet...

unspoken words...

unread,

not cared for words...

a grain of sand

a tiny grain

© 2013 falling_toxic_rain

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sirenribbon@thehptshirt..

This poem went a lot of places with not a lot of words. I enjoyed the hardness, without haste. Good Read:))

Posted 13 Years Ago

13 Years Ago

Hm, yea I've been pretty scattered I guess it reflexs that. Either waY thanks for youre review, I ve.. read more

Lady Celery

This was interesting because even though it was very short it was also complex and it made me think for a bit. I liked it

Posted 13 Years Ago

13 Years Ago

Thanks.

DogDrawler

This is one unique grain of sand out of a dune!
You gave me an idea! Thanks for inspiring me!

Posted 13 Years Ago

13 Years Ago

Hmm thanks....
Ooh I'm happy that it's inspired you..

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Added on January 6, 2013
Last Updated on January 6, 2013

Author

falling_toxic_rain

Utopia, CA

About

Get to know me: I am an open book, you can know me better than anyone has ever known me by reading my writes. I've never met anyone who has fully understood any of my works, so if you like try it,.. more..