sratched

it makes me laugh inside,

what stupid little gaze

it makes me shed a tear

when all is lost and done

these memories linger in the dark

where 

i cant seem to catch my breath

            

  

 

ive been decieved, ive been kicked

theyve laughed in my face

and been left here for dead

not once

not twice

but countless

ive said my darkest secrets,

shared my bliss

                                                                                        

Reviews

[uTitta]

I like the affect this poem gives, not only on they eyes though! It's really something to be taken into greater measure.

[falling_toxic_rain]

Thank you.:)

[creativequill]

This makes me think of running from nightmares, feeling trapped or haunted. It's a fantastic piece, you have great talent.

[falling_toxic_rain]

Oh well I guess it could be a nightmare-
Thanks for the review

[dead dreamer]

I like this one. Everyone pulls knives from their backs or leaves them in when betrayed....

[falling_toxic_rain]

Yea....
Thanks for the review