saturday

i'm sitting

-watching-

it's raining, or it was
the room has gotten brighter
but my mind has lost it's color

she said, "dream, dream, FAFSA, dream, dream, March 2"

can i say i haven't?

i'm surrounded by peers-they don't know
i see their faces splattered with boredom
filled with nothing
tired-bored
i hear a whisper, "I don't wanna fill it out"
followed by a mumble, "don't"

I'm sitting

-watching-

it's raining, or i think it was
the room has gotten brighter
but my mind has lost it's color

what can i say, i'm a dreamer

Reviews

[Lulu1258]

I like this, make your dreams a reality. Fill out the application. Pursue your dreams. great poem.

[falling_toxic_rain]

Hah, thanks,

[AlchemicPlutonian]

This is fantastic.

Something as mundane as sitting in a room with people filling out their FAFSAs, obviously your mind is going to wander.

Putting it into a form of eloquence by almost juxtoposing the fact that your mind has lost it's color, literally IN a prose about something that has none.

Personally, I think this is brilliant.

[falling_toxic_rain]

Thanks you very much.:)

[Forevermore]

I like, im a lil slow to understand the meaning behind it but I like it though lol

[Blood_knight3000]

yes. you are a Dreamer.
I like it.