Birth of My Son

Birth of My Son

A Poem by Luke
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Haiku about the birth of my son, title pretty much says it all...

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He waits in angst,

Cries shatter the pristine room.

At Last! He is here!

© 2008 Luke


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Luke
Constructive criticism always welcome!

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only criticism this is a senryu not a haiku

Posted 17 Years Ago

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Added on December 20, 2008

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Providence, RI



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