Redemption

life is full of colors, ups and downs.

Unrelenting it may seemed,

In a constant change and endless battle.

like an injured fighter, weary and weakened.

Like a leaf melodiously descending, 

thin and wilting.

Caged by momentary pleasure, slave of indiscretions,

devouring each day in shame and deception.

Running away from illusions, terrified and consumed.

A day will come to set forth a fresh journey, 

as twilight resonates with fire, awaken soul breaking free.

An oasis of faith and victory, a lush of hope and glory.

Yearning for blissfulness, A redeemed life to flourish each day.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

There is always light for those that believe. Darkness may seem never ending at times, but there is always a chink of light on the horizon for those who are patient. Lovely poetic description here in some lines.

Chris

[cor.empire]

encouraging indeed! I my room is open for improvements over time. many thanks again Chris!

[Jasmin]

Nice poem. There's a light at the end of the tunnel..

[cor.empire]

and there will be light!
just don't be disheartened! Thanks much!