Hail nature!

As poets we all love nature and the elements, go green and preserve

In water's waves
Fire's flames
Air's gusty wind.
Earth's dust
tree leaves
icy chilly feel.

In whis-per-ings
Shiny things
Green grass that sways.
Starring skies
Luna eyes
Even sunny rays.

Nature speaks through all of these,
So lend a listening ear.
And let grow, until there's more
So we may still be here.

Reviews

[Geo Lawrence]

i like the effect in stanza two, line one. good work.

[Costa Siwale]

thank you so much for taking the time to read. I appreciate it, and will return the favour

[Lydia Shutter]

Beautiful imagery, personification, and rhyming. Your love of nature shines through every line! Lydi***

[Costa Siwale]

thank you for reading Lydia

[1VJ]

The first verse is nicely syncopated leading down the path to personification mid the forces of nature and a critical message to be heeded.

[Costa Siwale]

indeed...and thank you for taking time to read Paloma. much appreciated

[CD Campbell]

I enjoyed this Costa. I like the sudden bursts of natural images and the positive message at the end. CD

[Costa Siwale]

am glad you enjoyed it. thank you for reading my friend

[Stanley R. Teater]

I love the song-like quality of this poem. Excellent

[Costa Siwale]

exactly what i was going for lol, thank you so much for reading Stanley R

[TheAimlessWanderer]

your words are so organic and flow freely it really spoke to me if only more people thought like you the world might not be becoming so bare you planted a seed of caring in my heart and i thank you for that (:

[Costa Siwale]

thank you so much for reading, your words are so refreshing

[TheAimlessWanderer]

you are most welcome my friend feel free to send me some read request i would love to read them (:

[EvaThornburn]

Well penned write. Though sad, it flows so nice. Keeps the reader interested. Thanks, for sharing. Eva

[Costa Siwale]

thank you so much Eva

[Pax]

you have a unique flow my friend, it flows beautifully and well expressed on how you see our nature, sadly due to our greed its almost bald...

[Costa Siwale]

Thank you Pax

[lovesrgraham]

I love this poem. It's beautifully written. I love the compliments you gave, to the beauty that is nature.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Wow! I really felt to be with nature while reading your poem. Wonderfully crafted...