Scars of War!

I wanted to write about these continuous wars and their effects, very tragic indeed

Echoes of war in a distance!
Choking stench of blood, a nuisance,
The grounds, burdened with death!
While the souls chant their curse.

Humans of hardened hearts!
Burn the genesis of young life.
The sting of women's cries,
Echoes through the millennial skies!

Are we not monsters?
To justify the works of death!
To slaughter the youngest of breath!

Woe! to the war-like..
Burn! their wretched kind!
Tame their wicked mind!
Oh! you gods!

Author's Note

your reviews are welcome

Reviews

[Drama Child]

A master of words with this poem. I can feel every word, one line compliments the next.
"Are we not monsters? To justify the works of death! To slaughter the youngest of breath!" The whole poem emotes such raw emotion of the horrors of war but that stanza in particular drives it through the heart. Well done Sir!

[Costa Siwale]

thank you indeed, Drama. your words are kind

[Jay free]

I am reminded of Brian Eno. When he sampled poetic insight into world war. Your life rods capture and frame an image if a world you can see in great detail!! Love your work Man!!! Power to you!!

[Costa Siwale]

thanks a thousand Man! much appreciated

[dead scribe]

This is good, iv been through war, and this describes it in a very poetic way.

[Gee]

You obviously think hard on what you write and this is shown in the end result.Very good Costa

[Sami Khalil]

You have summed up the effects and causes of wars marvelously in a,great poetic language. Maximum is youreffect...:).....

[Costa Siwale]

Thank you Sami.. Your words are refreshing. Thank you

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. Any time...:).....

[CD Campbell]

Costa. I don't know how you found my page and took the time to comment, but I'm glad you did. I went through a few of your poems and I really like your work, especially this one. This has unprecedented high imagery and thought. Friend me and RR me when you put anything new out please. CD

[Chirag Kumar]

Great piece of work brother. I liked the way you described the extremity of war in a concise manner. Even i have wriiten a poem on wars titled 'Please Stop This'. If possible do review my work too. Thanks :)

[Costa Siwale]

Thank you Kumar. And I will review your work

[Saddam]

Are we not monsters?
To justify the works of death!
To slaughter the youngest of breath!

Very deep thought indeed my friend. Yes we are moster for human beings, at last we are sapianse. Great write, thought provoking poetry.

[Costa Siwale]

Thank you very much SSADD, your comments are always refreshing

[Saddam]

thank you very much sir....my pleasure.