My state

just a lot of complaining

i feel it fade every passing day
the hopefulness of that child i once were,
unfruitful words spoken everyday
inspiration lingering with the elusive air.
my sore eyes gaze tiredly...
at a favor-less world,
where day and night
and cold and heat
where pain and joy
have burnt me away,
it all seems grey now...
all to mold into worthless doubt.

 

Author's Note

review

Reviews

[TheAimlessWanderer]

you just hit it so nicely the world wears us down and we wonder what is the point there is no definitive answer to this and i wonder this too we live for no reason except the one we create ourselves to strive towards that is the answer i have come up with life may not have meaning on its own but nothing has meaning unless a value is placed on it so we choose to strive towards a life worth living whatever that means i don't know i am here for curiosity i guess alright now onto the review you have perfectly encapsulated what life is like without purpose such vivid imagery and great flow the story told is captivating in so few words Amazing write my friend i hope you vent more so i can read it (;

[Costa Siwale]

i truly agree, finding true purpose can give headaches. and value is placed on things for them to be meaningful, i like your analysis. thank you so much for taking time to read, i appreciate it.

[Rebecca Garber]

I believe that you are really speaking from your heart. You are speaking abut something you really believe witch will make it easier for you to write witch you did. Since you enjoyed it you were able to make it smooth and flow right in with each other. You don't seem to have struggled to write this at all. I congratulate you on that.

[Costa Siwale]

thank you for reading Garber, and thank you for such refreshing comments, its very encouraging .

[Jay free]

Wow! You have captured the way of a heart who truly knows, what is going on. Brilliant!!

[Costa Siwale]

thank you for reading Jay Free, much appreciated