peppermint patties

peppermint patties

A Poem by brianna vega

a long night

a whispered sigh

darling your the only thing in my eyes

chaos is evident

and your always coming up with a suprise

so i shake my head

and hide a smile

but i know you see it in my eyes

oh lover lets wrap ourselves in it

plunge dive

into this bliss

life isnt hard when you remind me not to panic

but i still cant stop this shaking

when your fingers land on mine

oh how this loves sublime.

© 2012 brianna vega


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Beautiful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love your emotions of yearning...it's like soft whispers of the night to a lover. A beautiful read.

~Ev

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

brianna vega

13 Years Ago

thank you love. it is soft whispers.
Everett DeValle

13 Years Ago

You are so welcome, Brianna...soft whispers does tickle the soul. :)

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brianna vega
brianna vega

city of lost angels, CA



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