moments

words flow faster than i could handle

slow down love

take a breath

the world is in no rush

make this moment matter

were only here for the longest instant

eternity.

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

That's definitely the feel of a writer on a roll, words pouring out faster than he can type. I do that often, and have to slow myself down or jam my computer up. The other strength I like, in all your poems, is their sparseness--you don't wear the reader out. That alone thakes a great deal of skill. You're a great writer.

[brianna vega]

thank you so much.

[Sami Khalil]

Very nice and thought provoking poem...

[EMF]

Both gentle and beautiful with an underlying passion that shines through the words. If that isn't a contradiction. And a poem to be savoured. Not rushed. And one to definatley return to

[brianna vega]

thank you :] its always a pleasure to know youve enjoyed it

[Everett DeValle]

Nice...hush tones, and smooth delivery...yes, moments like this should be enjoyed.

A lovely read.

[brianna vega]

thank you :]

[Everett DeValle]

You're welcome. :)