.....rides

wind in my face

im going to win the race

chasing after the beautiful music you play

not usually my original taste

but its beautiful all the same

sleeping streets

golden lights

all the worlds beneath our feets

rotating with the sheep

 

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

I like the imagery in this one, more than anything else. It's got a slightly off-balance feel to it, too--like a stream that, for a bare heartbeat, flows uphill. It's really refreshing, because it's not formula--not standard-issue poetry, I mean. Nice

[brianna vega]

thank you. i like to make people stumble and reread lines sometimes when a poem flows too much i feel it goes in one ear and out the other

[EMF]

Absolutley stunning. From the theme to the slightly off beat single line that hightens the poem. Superb work. Enough to take the breath away. WHich it duly did.

[brianna vega]

I appreciate your reviews i hate when i get views and no thoughts on my pieces.

[EMF]

I'd have given more but a) it blew me away and b) I'm at work and trying to fit in around customers. It truly deserves more comment.