self?

self?

A Poem by brianna vega

perhaps every thought should be guarded

one should not rule by emotion

nor by intellect

instead a perfect balance is necessary

a questioning of the soul

to see what actions are right

not only for the moment

or the individual

but the soul

and the souls one touches

we must leave this form

encompass our reality

and transform our galaxies

into the highest possible

version of oneself.

© 2012 brianna vega


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Words wouldn't be able to express what my eyes have just read and it was just sure brilliance.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

brianna vega

13 Years Ago

thanks tj!
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wow, i really like this and i can relate to it totally.
Hope everyone can be like that.
the wisdom of your words shines bright.
well done.
instant *fav*
~100

Posted 13 Years Ago


brianna vega

13 Years Ago

yay im glad you enjoyed it.
I really do like this one. People spend their whole lives doing this, searching for themselves, defining themselves. I sometimes think if we ever realized the true definition of who and what we are, we'd probably keel over dead from terror

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brianna vega

13 Years Ago

true.

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