inspiration

inspiration comes to me at night

a viscious lover

she keeps me waiting

she rocks me like a violent storm

passionately burning

till im on my knees

quivering and heaving

she takes my energy

and watches with glittering eyes

as we transform it with our love

or lust

shes a song

that must be sung

only by the truly passionate

oh my love

close your eyes and escape with me tonight

she whispers into my mind

then with a gush

we run

inspiration and i

 

Reviews

[sarah04h]

I don't normally read poems but this is incredible!
I love the adjectives and verbs that are used. They create a vivid image.

[brianna vega]

thanks dear :]

[sharonlee]

How vividly apt... a splendid poetic description of inspirations! Leads me on merry adventures too!

Peace

[brianna vega]

thank you love :]

[EMF]

Why are no more people clammering to read you? OI! YOU ON THE NEWSFEED. READ THIS>>>>> NOW>>>>>>>>> YOU WILL MISS ONE HELL OF A POEM IF YOU DO NOT.
And it is one Hell of a poem. Let the rest of them babble on about form and symitry and all the rest of it. You are proving yourself to be one of the most talented writers on this site. Bear thaat in mind, when the jealous start sniping. Because this one truly kicks arse

[brianna vega]

omg thank you. i really wish more people commented i always see views but never feed back. so i never know if anyone likes my writings.

[EMF]

Trust me. You are good. Some will read and not comment because they'll not know quite what to say. Done that myself. Some will just be spitting feathers of jealousy.