open lips

I can open up my heart

 just as easily as these lips part

Will you listen when I start?

Will your body respond

to the beating of my heart?

As our ribs rise and collapse

Lungs filling lungs releasing

Will you listen to the whisper of my breath

As we slumber as one

Off in each others dreams

Dancing to different streams

 

Reviews

[Fornever Always]

Beautiful.
The title is really attracting, and the poem itself is relation and rhythm. You did well, and I enjoyed it!

[brianna vega]