..when you need me

When life changes so suddenly

Will we ever get a chance to sit and think

The world spins

Like a glass top

On a shelf above stone

Will we turn over the edge

Or forever dance upon the ledge

Of hopes and dreams

Reviews

[Fornever Always]

Amazing..
That's a really professional-like poem.
I like the last three lines the most, but I love this poem all over! It's just so..wow!
The title relates to the poem, but best if it's relateable to the reader, which I think is outstanding.

[Bri 810]

I really like this! I think a lot of times life can really feel like a spinning top and completely out of control and that image is great in this.

[brianna vega]

thank you!