hush

  hush

Listen now

Music is vibrating through the air

Penetrating my soul

As others strength and passion reaches my ears

I shout out loud in my heart

Oh blessed ears

Blessed words

Time and rhythm can heal this hurt

Music is movement

Time shared

Experience made

Reviews

[Fornever Always]

The way you wrote it is the first thing you notice. If it were longer, this would make for an amazing spoken word poem.
I like the title being your first line. It works well!
I feel like it made sense, but I didn't really understand the last lines relevance. I'm sure there was a reason,I just don't know it.
Thank you for giving me such a good read.

[brianna vega]

thank you for taking your time to read and review.

[Rob Santana]

Wow I already like your style of writing. Very eccentric. Awesome piece.

[brianna vega]

thank you.

[Relic]

Music has such an influence on the human heart and mind. It can motivate, incite or soothe us in our 'time shared' with it. I've heard it said that if you play heavy metal music with the speakers near a plant it will die. But classical music makes it grow. Odd how those vibrations you speak of can control life forces.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

The poem can be about how listening to music without others interrupting is good manners