oh lover

I sat In a world alone

Watching clouds float past

Glittering in their lining

I watched you pass me in the street

'I almost guessed your name

Sometimes I wonder if you ever seen me?

Lost lovers in a spinning life

Why do I get so scared to dream?

Reviews

[Relic]

Many times dreams are friendly until an element of loss comes in. The clouds pass and move on as lovers often do. Perhaps the glitter is the lessons we learn from the experience when we are alone. Nice poem.

[brianna vega]

thank you. im always great full for the reviews :]

[Fornever Always]

Wow. These are your natural thoughts? I really like your poems, because it really makes a person feel like the only person around, in a space of darkness, with the words to guide.

[brianna vega]

i try to speak to the individual

[Fornever Always]

That's a really good way of doing things. I've never heard of that. My mind's been blown. I should try something like that sometime.

[Rob Santana]

Deep emotions expressed. Well written Brianna, Thanks for the friend request...

[brianna vega]

np thank you for the reviews. they are greatly appreciated.

[Wórdsmíth]

Wow ... yes, your words`re very insightful, intriguing about love. I like reading this poem ;)

[brianna vega]

thank you.