....

I see in the shades of your eyes

Darkness

Sorrow

Helplessness

Then right in the center is a spark

Rebelliousness

Courage

And that my dear is what we must nurture

Reviews

[Fornever Always]

Very true statement. I like the way you wrote the poem and how you left out not just some, but all, punctuation. It's very unique to me because in someway it seems more blank (not in a bad way) and it's very easy to focus on the meaning. Especially since you didn't do what most writers do and went out of the box with a very frank poem. I very much enjoyed it!
Now for the downside, you already have a poem with a title ..... so .... is pretty close and confusing. Maybe one should have a new name?

[Vynyco]

Hey, this is awesome.
Somehow, I always think that it's a good thing to feel bad and I do everything to stay in that state of mind (often unconsciously) because I am used to it and I think that this is where I will get my inspiration. This poem says what I do not seem to get in my head: to focus on the little fire inside that contains all the motivation and feed it.