trembling.

the ability to hold back astounds me

as every inch of my body craves to move 

     closer faster deeper

whirlwind of emotions

     i feel the universe shifting

scenes blend rythmically 

     inspired once more

I've arisen with the day

as my eyes stay glued to your skin

     your shape

     your eyes

i can feel my mind racing

dancing to the beat of your breath

    invasion

i can feel your name escaping my lips in sighs

    and into the night i lay

    watching your body rise

 like mountains trembling beneath the weight of your dreams.

Reviews

[Alexx]

This is great! It captures many things I wish I could say, but struggle to express.

[brianna vega]

thank you! your input is greatly appreciated.

[Rob Santana]

Strong imagery. Your words have a good flow to them. Nicely done.

[brianna vega]

thank you love!