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i exist in the half breathe of a sigh

i am the expectant of a hope

halfhearted disapointment.

Reviews

[youngkingkwan]

I agree with terry, you really captured the feeling. Wow!

[brianna vega]

thank you!

[terry smith]

I know this feeling well...very well written..I like your style:)

[brianna vega]

thank you! much appreciated!

[terry smith]

sure...i like finding new good poets:)

[brianna vega]

well feel free to take a read :]

[terry smith]

i will :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Its has a nice poetic effect around, well written!

[Misery]

In that half breath of a sigh much emotion and poetic expression exists.
Keep sharing your creations, dear poet.

[brianna vega]

thank you.:]