Ghost

Lately I've been feeling the world's against me
Each turn each move just seems to deplete me
As I struggle struggle to stay afloat I feel the wind blow against me
Shaking and shivering in the rain
These cold sweats awake me
Bringing me near to death I feel my mind slip away
Fever sweats I sleep through the day
Only to awaken at night
A somber ghost
With no means of communication I become a monster
A shell
A dishivelled appiration.

Reviews

[Ghost]

Wow, I know this feeling as I lose myself. I was touched by your words.

[An owl on the moon]

Powerful and painful, the ghost of you feels like the mist of morning that fades in the sunrise. There is an aching here, and from me a hoping that the storms will turn away and that you'll find light again, strength again to rise in. Amazing writing, dear friend.