F**k... Another broken heart among the stars

F**k.
That's the only word I wanna yell
Ramble scream destroy some things
I'll intensions leave me weak
I just wanna hold you baby while you sleep
Sink in to me
Bleed through me
Tell me that you will not leave
Tell me that I can believe
Cause honey I know
We've both seen some things
Fell to hell
Been dragged about
Now all the others say not to pout
F**k.
That's the only word I wanna yell
F**k.
Ramble scream destroy some things
F**k.
Your I'll intentions leave me weak.
Sink into me
Bleed through
Just tell me baby you won't leave

Reviews

[Twilight]

In the third line, did you mean to type "My intentions leave me weak"; rather than "I'll"?. Anyway, this is so passionate, portraying a woman who really knows what clinging to a man; really means. Indeed, she practically wants to merge into him; and be one with him. She wants him to confirm in the final line, that he "won't leave" her. Indeed, it's suggested that they have been through a lot together. In terms of being broken-hearted, that only seems likely; if her man dies or just goes his own way. However, the writer may have left it for readers to ponder; why this woman feels at risk of losing her lover for whatever reason? On the other hand, she could simply be insecure; so that her need for this man seems unusually strong? Whatever the cause for her obsessional love, it rings true from the heart; and well expressed. One reviewer objected to "too many f***s", but maybe that's because he isn't getting enough lol? Indeed, I suspect that possible alternative phrases like "oh golly gosh", or "goodness gracious me"; wouldn't quite work here lol? Thanks, for sharing. I accept "read requests" on this site too, and you'd be welcome to send them to me.

[genocide]

You feel broken hearted and fucked up and feel you have no one to turn to

[Wayfaring stranger]

Too many f***s and no pleasure.