pit

pit

A Poem by brianna vega

Lets do it like this

Jump around

And shake our fist

Lets feel this beat in our bones

In our hearts

I dont knoe the words

But ill pretend

I feel this in my soul

Smash around

Covered in sweat

In water

In all our dreams

All our hopes

Our hurt

Our sadness

Our fears

Weellll scream it out

Beat it out

Its lost in the chaos.

 

 

© 2008 brianna vega


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What a cool discription of the ever present mosh pits at concerts and in the dance clubs across the country.
you have captured this feeling well in your words.
Good job!

Posted 17 Years Ago



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brianna vega

city of lost angels, CA



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