ahhhhh

feeling connected is so difficult
                 i want a new passion           a muse
anything
                          im begging im begging oh   universe hear me out
this world is lacking for me right now
         these vapid times they wear me out
 give me an answer something to sing about
                                    i cant go living cigarette to cigarette
        simple words of the same old thing
                      i need to move i need to get out
im gonna scream                   and shatter every glass around me
                tear  these walls  surrounding me
every where every where every where
                                this plainness is much too much
        my heart is thumping my thoughts are running my blood is rushing my fingers are typing
                                  but i feel as if im going no where
         passion fills mee
   now let me out!

Reviews

[Trevor]

lovely just lovely Sometimes the universe isn't just enough for our entertainment, right?

[TAO]

sounds like every second of every minute of a day off of work... Wishing for something to happen (even if it's a disaster - forgive me). The tension in this poem is palpable, especially because it can be identified with. Now I need to get out before I'm reminded... Outstanding.