great minds cant sleep at night by john stussy & echo

This silence without movement,

This void without words,

Seems crushing to me,

The worst sound I've heard.
     pressing down like a walls fallen against my chest
the still air is thick
 so hard to lift away
filling filling.

Suffocation in the vacuum

Keeps silent my screams,

I'm reaching for you,

Trying to claim inspiration.
closed eyes
dry throat
ill heave up thoughts pour out emotions
 i cant keep them down much longer

Literary explosion

Corrodes on through,

A violent sound,

The impending crescendo;

 its coming out escaping me
             slicing through the silence
thinning out the air
                    letting me breathe

Splashes on paper

Of frantic letters,

Thoughts seep out

In their great escape.

calm mind rushed words
constant thoughts now organized
the voice of keys being pressed effortlessly

Reviews

[Trevor]

Love? An idea longing to be written on a page?? very good, thanks for the visuals!

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Wow, this is amazing. Great flow, you both did a wonderful job. Awesome write!!!

Heather