anxiety

in out in out
          her heart was racing
     pumping violently in her chest
hands shaking
                              tears streaming down her face
she felt ridiculous
                     she didnt want the group to see
         having them watch made it worse
      but she couldnt leave the room in time
                      she knew it wasnt a heart attack            but it hurt
                and   what if they where wrong
                what if it was
                                she could have beem misdiagnosed
                    they dont really have a way of testing these things
             in out in out                  breathe
                          

Reviews

[Trevor]

wow, this captures it very well

[Miss Coral]

Nice piece... the structure really furthers the panic, as does the phrase. Nicely developed tone.
Good job. c:

Coral