ollld poem from dec 2008

when everything feels special.

and creativity fills my brain.

and the magics at my fingertips.

and the world transforms at my will.

theres to much beauty to give up.

on life on the world on dreams on this.

i can give you everything in this heart.

i can draw you every image on my mind.

i can let out evrey word on this tongue.

but with anther swallow i fall back to sleep.

save me please wake me from my dreams.

Reviews

[Bard Constantine]

I like this... gives the feeling of one having so much potential... only to lose it somewhere, in the place in between hearts... somewhere lost in dreams...