aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh

i fall in love with the broken bones
the kids the boys the lost souls
wanting to make everything right i stay up all night with no peace of mind
selfish or unselfish this s**t wont leave me
and i need to break free from these chains i keep picking up
these strings binding me up
imdone im done
theyre just distractions to keep me from truly loving truly breaking
.............................................................


oh heavens please shout out
im scared
im back up on that wall again
hidden behhind the garage
rooftops and back yards is all i can see
and these clouds fly past running racing the wind
im back up on that broken fence
i thought he was different
but  is he like alll the rest/
is it me who is wrong
should i run set myself free?
or let this be? work it out
am i afraid of real love?
or do i just hang tight to this faux this con
this
reproduction

Reviews

[No use.]

Being too suspicious of our own motives and drives can be sometime counterproductive, getting carried away in our defenses, intellectualizing to the point where it leads to more confusion bc love is not all that intelligent of a subject lol ~ honestly bc of this love is such a pain, bitchin and moaning, it's like a lose -lose , love ain't never satisfied!

[Kelley]

We all go through this, sad but true.
But we also learn from each mistake we make.

Great poem!

Kelley

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I think some people go for the wrong people cause they do fear true love or don't feel worthy, very uniquely expressed.

[Miss Coral]

Beautiful piece; wonderful emotion and language. I would perhaps go through and add in some punctuation to even out the tempo, but otherwise this is excellent.

-Coral-

[Bard Constantine]

This slices like shards of shattered feelings... you can feel the fear and confusion. Vivid writing, great to catch up with you...

[.]

The world makes you feel like this sometimes..maybe the person you need to concentrate on loving is you..the rest will seem like a walk in the park..an emotional shout out. well done

[Jonathan De Elvira]

this was lovely love

[TAO]

Well...the title says it all, I suppose... Truth is, this is very, very good. Beautiful, even, broken as the point is-we get it, much too well. No need to say this, I think, but truly well done piece.