slow words

sooo
let the slow words burn inside yoour ears
lighting a fire behind those ribs where you cage your heart
soooo let the slow words slip down your throat in the tears
that slip down your cheeks
somehow landing in your mouth
salty and sweet upon those lips
sooo let the slow words
burn inside your belly
cause you can feel the truth they hold
churning inside
like a baby just waiting to be burn
you feel the syllables kick
sooo let the slowww wordsss
change the chemicles in your mind
creating some new thoughts
creating some kinda peacefulness
some kinda clearness that you never felt before
sooo let the slow words make that feeling come up
that feeliingg thhattt feeels like love my love
sooo lettt the slow wordss wake upp that thing inside
that jumbles up those words that sound soo pure in your mindd
soo let the sloowww words
burn up every harsh memory that you keep upon your soft round shoulders
hunching them up
cause your so tense and stressed
soooo let the slow words ring in your soul
sooo let the slooooowww words be
cause at this moment
these sloooooowww words are the only thing that exist

Reviews

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I think this is a great imagery filled piece with a clever idea..I don't believe that you need to add the extra letters to convey that the words should be thought of slowly..that is already the image you have given your reader. Other than that it good