warm my temperture

hopeless hopeless hopeless hopeless!
i feel it consuming once again
this hunger
this battlefield between mind spirit & body
i can not fall
moment by moment
second by second
this hunger
this vivid scorching overwhelming hunger
 

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[DavidRyanM]

I dig this a lot. I might get rid of the first line just because the rest of the poem conveys that so you don't have to have it in there really.