homestuck

Hug that porcelain god like it’s all you got
Homestuck and you forgot what it’s all about
Lying on the floor sinking into the world
Sensation over takes you as the world begins to whirl
Spinning colors
Lost lovers
Melting faces too many places
Time relapse
Time is cut in gaps

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[Personne]

40 views and not one review? What the heck?
Anyways,
I think this is a wonderful poem and the first line sets this up perfectly. I also clicked on the because it was called, 'Homestuck' and I like a webcomic called Homestuck, but yeah off topic...
The last five lines I rushed through and the last line I read all slow... Just, like, "Time is cut in gaps..." It's so brilliant I just can't explain it! :b
Great poem(: